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| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] | | Pages (30): [ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: Kanchan On: July 28, 2020 02:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm speechless
| Title: Thank you!
Reviewed By: Hannah_Tendo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2015 04:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you! I will remember this amazing travel for the rest of my
life! Maybe some day I could translate it to portuguese, my
language! What do you think? Thank you again!!
| Title: Delectable
Reviewed By: Shay14689 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2013 22:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite simply amazing. I loved every word of this fic. I will confess, I'm one of those horrible readers that never really reviews. But I just started getting into Dragon Ball fan fiction with special (main) interest in the Bulma/Vegeta pairing, and you were the first author I stumbled across and I'm so glad it was you because you gave me everything I could have wanted. What a fantastic first experience in this fandom! I've been reading a different fandom for almost the past decade and I finally went out on a limb for this one hoping I wouldn't come to find a bunch of immature preteens trying to write like when I first got into the Twilight fan fiction (in my defense, that was not the fandom I've been reading for the past decade, but Twilight was the first one I tried). Thank you so much for the great story. Very entertaining, and very sexy. You're a very good author. You just need to find a beta to clean up a few mixed words here and there, and that's the only constructive criticism I have for you. I read most of your otherDBZ fics today, except Fixation. It makes me sad that you quit writing B/V fics since you do them so well. Maybe one day, you'll write another great adventure like Lab Monkey. If so, you have a very eager bookworm waiting for it. :o) | Title: This fanfic deserves its own fanfics, it's that good
Reviewed By: Body Electric [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2013 19:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And then they go home, get married, and nine months later pop out Trunks. Right? Right? Right. No but seriously, this story ripped my heart out and put it back together right at the end. The plot was amazing, the words were impeccable, and the love was perfect. I loved the characterization: Bulma's personality, and holy shit Vegeta asldkfj, I can't even begin. He was so hot I was crooning after him along with Bulma. Thank you so much for writing such a masterpiece (along with "Fixation", holy balls that one is one of my absolute favorites). If any persons out there decide to get into the B/V fandom, there must be a written rule somewhere stating that reading this MUST BE A REQUIREMENT. Anyway, I know you're done with this fandom, but thank you for all of your contributions. It has readily solidified and fueled my passion for B/V. Thank you so much! | Reviewed By: Bronzelover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2013 09:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is like the fifth time that im reading this fic youre the best! | Reviewed By: Veggie Kun On: January 26, 2013 21:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A true master piece of B/V romance. The dark prince at his best (or worst in Vegeta´s case) in an Alternate Universe. It´s so well written and original, I have read it three times since it was posted in different websites, and is still my favourite. Although I am a big fan of your work in general, this is my favourite story. The complexity of Vegeta is such that you find yourself with the same dilemma of Bulma, to love him or to fear him. | Title: Epic doesn't cover it
Reviewed By: sophowee [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2012 06:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the most perfect story in the motherfucking world. Seriously, there is only Fixation left for me to read and I'm so devastated because you are simply the best and I wont have anything else to read from you :(. Anyway, thank you for sharing those FANTASTIC stories with us, there are no words to describe your amazingness. Btw, the rating is too low, you certainly dont deserve a 10 but a 5 million at least! | Reviewed By: hplovecat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2011 16:14 PST
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You are (were?) a really gifted writer. I adore and have favorited every one of your dbz stories, on this site and ffn. Your characterization and interpretation of Vegeta is, by far, my favorite. I think you capture his allure--that trifecta of brutishness, wit and affection--expertly. You describe him and I literally drool. There aren't many fics that cause me to envy the author's skill, but yours always do. | Title: :)
Reviewed By: Kayurakof FFnet On: July 16, 2011 21:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wanted to say that I'm very glad you weren't done with this fandom. If it weren't for the stories "Fixation" and "Pink Silk" I'd've never found this story. I must say that I'm a solid fan of you. This story was just amazing, and I'v ebeen reading it in every spare moment I've had. I'm goning to read your other stories as well, but not tonight. I need to sleep, but I'll probably pick one up first thing tomorrow after breakfast. I found out with this story (and I had the same propblem with "Fixation") that if I don't have breakfast first I'll blowit off until I have 10 minutes to be at work. I even pulled it up at my lunch breaks to read and wound up clocking back in late everytime because of it. Looking at your other reviews I'm not the only one with a simular story. YOu really should try writing professionally. You'd bank. Seriously. | Reviewed By: Feuria On: April 09, 2011 22:59 PDT
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i loved this piece of fanfiction. thank you for writing. the concept of the hole (and vegetas resulting fear of bugs as shown in the anime) this wonderfull AU, the logic behind everything - like bombs and why alien wouldnt need weapons as they are weapons itself. Really great, even if disturbing in some places. | Reviewed By: marlene_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2011 08:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maybe, maybe the best bxv history I have ever read! it was sooo funny! thank you very much. I love the way you have developed the characters. Bulma and vegeta are more complex than in the anime series, so just congratulations! I have enjoyed it very much :D | Title: Amazing!!
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2010 14:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read this story and I have to commend you. This was an amazing depiction of what could have been. I thought it was brilliantly written, and hugely enjoyable. I thought your characterization of Vegeta was spot ON. I just wanted to say thank you for sharing it with us, and sorry I did not review each chapter as I went along! | Reviewed By: Mei837 On: September 27, 2010 16:00 PDT
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Wow. I spent the course of 3 days just reading this fanfiction. 3 days that were WELL spent. I loved every second of it. Everything felt so realistic, the growth of Vegeta's hate/affection to true love, how their relationship developed. I'm a little sad it's all over now, but so happy that they got their happy ending. You really are the best author for Vegeta/Bulma! I've read your other stories too, and loved them, but this was my FAVORITE. It was absolutely fantastic. Oh by the way, you might want to change the fanfic status to "completed"? Heh. While reading, I saw that it said "in progress", and I was terrified that this was one of those abandoned fanfictions, but I kept trudging on. - Mei
| Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2009 09:29 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always luved your writing. If you ever wrote a Sessh/Kagome story I would be there in a heart beat.
| Reviewed By: Princess_of_the_Sayains [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2009 23:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this story once already, this will make the second time I've read it. I couldn't remember if I reviewed the first time so if I did I guess I'm doing it again XD. Absolutely brilliant work. The storyline was unique, your spelling and grammar are excellent, it was creative, and I had a great time reading it. You really know how to keep your read interested and on the edge wanting to know what would happen next. You did a wonderful job keeping both Bulma and Vegeta in character very well. I personally think you should do an epilogue that is 10 or 20 years down the road :P. Wonderful job.
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