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| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] | | Pages (30): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: hplovecat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2011 16:14 PST
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You are (were?) a really gifted writer. I adore and have favorited every one of your dbz stories, on this site and ffn. Your characterization and interpretation of Vegeta is, by far, my favorite. I think you capture his allure--that trifecta of brutishness, wit and affection--expertly. You describe him and I literally drool. There aren't many fics that cause me to envy the author's skill, but yours always do. | Title: :)
Reviewed By: Kayurakof FFnet On: July 16, 2011 21:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wanted to say that I'm very glad you weren't done with this fandom. If it weren't for the stories "Fixation" and "Pink Silk" I'd've never found this story. I must say that I'm a solid fan of you. This story was just amazing, and I'v ebeen reading it in every spare moment I've had. I'm goning to read your other stories as well, but not tonight. I need to sleep, but I'll probably pick one up first thing tomorrow after breakfast. I found out with this story (and I had the same propblem with "Fixation") that if I don't have breakfast first I'll blowit off until I have 10 minutes to be at work. I even pulled it up at my lunch breaks to read and wound up clocking back in late everytime because of it. Looking at your other reviews I'm not the only one with a simular story. YOu really should try writing professionally. You'd bank. Seriously. | Reviewed By: Feuria On: April 09, 2011 22:59 PDT
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i loved this piece of fanfiction. thank you for writing. the concept of the hole (and vegetas resulting fear of bugs as shown in the anime) this wonderfull AU, the logic behind everything - like bombs and why alien wouldnt need weapons as they are weapons itself. Really great, even if disturbing in some places. | Reviewed By: marlene_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2011 08:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maybe, maybe the best bxv history I have ever read! it was sooo funny! thank you very much. I love the way you have developed the characters. Bulma and vegeta are more complex than in the anime series, so just congratulations! I have enjoyed it very much :D | Title: Amazing!!
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2010 14:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read this story and I have to commend you. This was an amazing depiction of what could have been. I thought it was brilliantly written, and hugely enjoyable. I thought your characterization of Vegeta was spot ON. I just wanted to say thank you for sharing it with us, and sorry I did not review each chapter as I went along! | Reviewed By: Mei837 On: September 27, 2010 16:00 PDT
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Wow. I spent the course of 3 days just reading this fanfiction. 3 days that were WELL spent. I loved every second of it. Everything felt so realistic, the growth of Vegeta's hate/affection to true love, how their relationship developed. I'm a little sad it's all over now, but so happy that they got their happy ending. You really are the best author for Vegeta/Bulma! I've read your other stories too, and loved them, but this was my FAVORITE. It was absolutely fantastic. Oh by the way, you might want to change the fanfic status to "completed"? Heh. While reading, I saw that it said "in progress", and I was terrified that this was one of those abandoned fanfictions, but I kept trudging on. - Mei
| Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2009 09:29 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always luved your writing. If you ever wrote a Sessh/Kagome story I would be there in a heart beat.
| Reviewed By: Princess_of_the_Sayains [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2009 23:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this story once already, this will make the second time I've read it. I couldn't remember if I reviewed the first time so if I did I guess I'm doing it again XD. Absolutely brilliant work. The storyline was unique, your spelling and grammar are excellent, it was creative, and I had a great time reading it. You really know how to keep your read interested and on the edge wanting to know what would happen next. You did a wonderful job keeping both Bulma and Vegeta in character very well. I personally think you should do an epilogue that is 10 or 20 years down the road :P. Wonderful job.
| Title: Epic!
Reviewed By: Twilis On: February 20, 2009 23:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You sir/madam are a brilliant writer. You could do this for a living. You kept both of them in character with a mastery I have no seen in many years as a writer. You are a master at creating sexual tension like none I've ever seen. I'm very happy that you didn't do the typical 'sex in the first chapter and nothing interesting happens' like I've seen a lot of writers do. Your vocabulary is very refreshing I must so. This is one of the best stories I've read in quite a long time. Kudos to you and its a shame you don't write these kinds of stories anymore ^_^. Sphinx
| Reviewed By: Janey On: February 09, 2009 17:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing, amazing, amazing. So beautiful, the words describe feelings in scenes that strike me indescribably. Intensely sexual, but some parts leaves the heart warm and trembling. I enjoyed this fanfic so much. Thank you for writing this beautiful piece
| Title: I love it!
Reviewed By: Princess Buruma [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2008 09:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved your story. I spent entire days reading it and it was totally worth it. I enjoyed every chapter, every scene. I almost cried when they ate that girl alive, it really made me nervous; and I laughed at the Freeza/Zarbon/Cooler love thing. Vegeta and Bulma were exceptional, and the word Bitchess now even has a warm meaning to me XD I always avoided reading Alternate Universe fics, but I read yours because I knew it was very popular and I wanted to know what it was all about. And now I'm going to read more of them because I realized I can really enjoy them as well. All there's left to say is congratulations and thank you! ^^ Lab Monkey is a piece of art and I'm really glad I read it.
| Title: i'm in awe
Reviewed By: Fuyuna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 08:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're so cruel! you make me lack of sleep for almost 2weeks just because this fics! you make me me feel tired and sleepy in the morning and yet i still cannot sleep properly in the night! (Translation : oh..my...such an amazing story. it's really addictive i cannot stop read it and i must sacrifice my sleep time to read it every night until i lack of sleep).wow, it's like you built a story and character really from the basic. i'm regreting my self for not found this site and story years ago. it's absolutely the best fanfic ever!! So romantic, so touching, so cute, so Hot etc. and you're the most writer that i found so far, with a really amazing writing skill.you have such a good vocabulary, you make a clever sentence, creative story, good on description and most of all,with your style of writing, i feel like i know the characters in person. but...i feel a bit dissaponted about the ending. it's not that it wasn't good, but it feel like you tired of it so you put it on end in rush. it's feel like an open ending. like, what about Goku? is he die?why Krilin and friends didn't help Bulma when she's being captured by military, i wonder. anyway, you're really success in the description about emotion of the character. it's not boring. i always a fan of Bulma x Vegeta pairing, but i never thought i would love them so much like this. When i read a DBZ story in which Bulma X Vegeta meet a sad ending, i always read your story to heal my heart. You're my favorite author. i will read all of your anime fanfiction, i promise, mostly with an X rating ;P May i request? i liked to know the continuation about them, preferably after they have Trunks and Bra. I thought you never wrote their life after they got babies. why not make one? With your Sexy Vegeta and a good emotional description, i like to know his reaction and attitude toward their kids..of course in your point of view. Please.....
| Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 05:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I understand your decision to have both Vgeeta and Bulma relinquish the master slave, dominant subordinate relationship they had before, I think this last chapter had them establish themselves as equals, worthy competitors and partners. It seemed a liberation of sorts. I really enjoyed this story and I can't believe it's finished. I'm going to miss your interpreations of Bulma and Vegeta, I have been fascinated and enthralled with all of your stories.
| Title: miss you
Reviewed By: lafemmevegeta00 On: March 18, 2008 22:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for finishing this fic. It was great and the ending wasn't rushed for closure. I'll miss your writings but I definitly understand. Take care of yourself and continue loving Vegeta with me.
| Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 21:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Every time I read one of your fics I'm reminded of how much I love these characters. Your character development is unbelievably amazing. I think sometimes DBZ writers get so caught up in the stereotypes associated with this particular fandom that they forget to add the background psychology that makes the characters believable. Your stories and characters are so dark but it is the realism you bring to them that makes them so powerful and beautiful. You have been a great inspiration to me as a writer and seeing you finish this story has had a lot to do with remotivating me to work on my own. Thank you for yet another outstanding contribution to the B/V genre! Bravo!
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