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Reviewed By: Chigeon On: February 25, 2008 15:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No matter what other people say about your fics don't let it get you down. When I was in junior high I found one of your stories and been in love with them ever since. (I'm now 22 by the way.) I'm sure alot of people have been sticking with you for just as long if not longer. And to be able to do that is just amazing. B & V have been around for so long and every time I think I'm finally tired of the genre, I read one of your stories and fall in love with it all over again. I can honestly say that you are one of the great ones out there on everything. You captured us with all the emotional zest you put in your stories and the drama was perfect. Never to mushy or lame. (Anyone who thinks otherwise has probably never really been in love and doesn't know what it feels like to have the world fall from underneath them.) But enough of that. I wish you a good life, happiness and luck in all you do. After all, life is going to catch up to us sometime... P.S. I'll be keeping an eye out in case you ever itch to write a little something again. No matter the series by the way. (you know how exciting it was to find a writer who's stories I enjoyed and actually KNEW how to write?) Melissa, An extremely big fan of yours.
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Title: Thankyou
Reviewed By: carla0406 On: February 24, 2008 21:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one if the greatest stories I have read. I just want to say thank you for finishing it. Many great stories never see an ending I guess life gets in the way and we readers end up thinking...but it was going so well...I just wanted to know what happens at the end...Thank you for finishing your work and pleas try to keep writing, you rock!!!!
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Title: great work
Reviewed By: free-sprit - not logged in On: February 21, 2008 11:27 PST
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just makes me happy to read it. :) Great work. *thumbs up*
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Title: THANK YOU!
Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 10:11 PST
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Wow! Aweosme ending Tempest. That last chapter was really deep and Im really glad that you didnt end it with a lemon. The ending was perfect. Great job with this story and I just wanted to say that I enjoyed reading it as much as you em=njoyed writing it.
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Reviewed By: Little Rini On: February 17, 2008 20:56 PST
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Thank you for finishing the story. I was very happy to see the update.
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 18:20 PST
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i feel you on your being tired and what not but you must also admit that for a story in which you put that much effort, it deserved a better ending, than dancing in the air. vegeta's character would've never done that no matter how much he loves bulma. i love him taking the bullets but i feel that you owe it to the story you've put 4 yrs in to had given it more and just taken your time. it's my take. as a writer it takes time but i dont feel that it would be fair to myself, the story or the fans to just come up with some ending which does not correlate with their personnas. lovely story overrall. one of the best but a horrible ending scene.
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Reviewed By: allllly On: February 12, 2008 15:32 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. seeing the end of this fic really got me thinking. i started reading this when i was in high school...youve been at this thing for a long time! lol. its odd thinking that this story is over. it was one of my favorites. thank you for writing it! lol.
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Reviewed By: Sarah aka Vega [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 09:06 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He needed to get out of this cage soon or he was going to start getting lustful ideas about the bathroom sink. HAHAHAHA, this had me laughing quite a bit. Loving your fic so far!!! I started from the beggining now that you're finished.
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Reviewed By: pisq On: February 12, 2008 09:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this since it's beginning, so I can honestly say the ending wasn't at all what I expected. I've always loved every single chapter you wrote, but I understand why you did this. It's been 4 years, you've grown up, got tired and instead of just ignoring us and 4 years of absolutely fine writing you gave us this gift. An ending, not the perfect ending, but at least this wasn't one of those WIPs that never cease to be a WIP. Thank you so much for writing this story, I am disappointed at the last chapter, but know that I pretty much love every single word you wrote on Vegeta and Bulma! I give you my best regards! xoxo
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Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 21:05 PST
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wow! this story is finally finished! and it was great! i loved it! i loved ur fic! i can't express it with words as well as u can with emotions lol! but after reading this for so long it has never once gotten old and i have always got hooked on it with every chapter!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: February 11, 2008 20:50 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, I can't believe its almost been 4 years! Im glad you stuck with it though to finish it. I have so much respect for you from that. And I can understand not really being into DBZ anymore...I for one have moved to Inuyasha, but when ever I got an email notice saying you have updated I rush back to read. You did an amazing job with the fic girl, you should be proud. Are you still writing fanfiction after this?
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Title: This is surprising
Reviewed By: Caprice [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 16:26 PST
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I just finished chapter 36 on Saturday, and all of a sudden kaboom, here's your last chapter a day later. I didn't even have to wait for it. I believe this last chapter was good, but I am not sure I loved it. There are a few things that you kinda left in the air, such as the whole ki gun thing and the fact that you foreshadowed that the Colds may not have died in the explosion. I think I knew what you were aiming at, because after all it is a little implausible that Bulma single-handedly managed to wipe the Colds with their world-shattering power in a single explosion. Vegeta was supposed to be the ultimate savior, to redeem himself through it, and frankly giving him a chance to do so would have been very fair to the character. All in all I realize at this point you just didn't have it in you to extend the story, hence having to chop it off. I expected a little more zest at the end, especially because this is a really dark fic and an intensely passionate, lustful ending would have been fitting. Instead you chose to bring them into the light and strip them off that dark unconventional pull that tugged between them. I am not saying a Lemon was in order, but just something that reminds us of who they were and that they will retain that same spunk. The dancing inthe clouds, as romantic as it is, struck me as a bit Disney. Please do not take this review as if I am bashing your work, because overall, this story is fantastic. If it wasn't, I wouldn't be here writing so much about it. I am new generation, but thank you for what you left me. I am sorry I wasn't here 3 years ago. I wish you simply the best. Caprice
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Reviewed By: gandadiyosa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 15:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. I'm glad of this. Well ended. I'm done with this fandom myself, but you...made it into one helluva going away party, if you could call it that. A gem in a sea of middling fanfics, truly worthy of notice. I'll probably follow you to another fandom if you're gonna churn out another fanfic as kick-ass as this one is. Or better yet, hit your fans with some original piece. Make us fall in love with them all over again by breathing life into their souls. You are a magus of words. Use your gift well. Know that you are blessed.
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Title: Lost for words!
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 13:12 PST
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Wow it's over.I know what you mean when you say that it's time to move on. As much as i love Vegeta and bulma fanfictions i love the real world just as much. Thank you so much for giving us this wonderful story. I wish you well both you and your family. Maria.( a very big fan)
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Reviewed By: tin7979797 On: February 11, 2008 09:58 PST
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Thank you very much!
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