| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ebonyguitarchic [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 09:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I first found this fic I instantly fell in love. The passion with which you wrote seemed to evoke a desire for more all the time. But I have to sadly say I was quite disappointed with this last chapter. It's a horrible thing when stories get left undone but it's even worse when an author forces something out when they've clearly lost their zeal they started with. In the earlier chapters you can really tell you enjoyed writing this story but this last one seemed as if you were just trying to make the last four years you've been working on it not be wasted. While I commend you for finishing I wish you had put more heart into it. Altogether though this was a highly enjoyable fic and I am still impressed with it on a whole.
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Reviewed By: Izandria Johnson [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 06:00 PST
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Wow. You're such an amazing writer, and I love all your fics with this fandom. I'm saddened that you've decided to stop with this fandom. So now I must keep up with your new ones. The ending was great. I love the emotion you evoke from your writing. I hope you continue. Good Luck with your future projects.
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Reviewed By: venus_4902 On: February 11, 2008 05:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say I have been anxiously awaiting updates on this fic ever since I began reading it, somewhere around chapter 10, I believe. Though it is quite possibly the finest fanfic I have ever had the pleasure of reading, I have to say I'm a little glad to see it end. I'm just realizing that I have been awaiting new chapters for this story for about two years and it is good to no longer have to mild anxiousty of wondering if there would be a happy ending. :-P Great work, great style and great storytelling. I hope you never stop writing. Even if you give up fanfition, I hope you continue to use your fantastic gift. Thank you for a wonderful story.
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Reviewed By: lady azul On: February 11, 2008 04:53 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow its finally done and sniff well ya know. thank you for sharing and finishing. it was a pleasure to read
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Title: You are amazing.
Reviewed By: Zillah On: January 11, 2008 19:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in awe of your skills as a storyteller and as a writer. Your story is one of the best fanfics I have ever read. The personality and the emotions that you have put in your characters is really astounding. But, I have a request for you; please write more and finish it. The suspence is killing me!
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Reviewed By: Jasu On: January 08, 2008 03:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic! You have made this fic a work of art! There are quite a few spelling and grammar errors that disrupt the story, but the originality, characterisation and effortless style more than make up for it! Hope the next chapter comes soon - I'll be waiting eagerly for it~
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Reviewed By: Venus Legacy (not logged) On: January 06, 2008 16:26 PST
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Wow, that last chapter was ...wow, Vegeta was just deadly, the rage which engulfed him on the ship, the painful passion as he tried to destroy his memories of Bulma, and the deadly calm as he addressed the general..I loved it. I wonder what has become of Bulma...
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Reviewed By: MisaoChan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 09:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I have to say is that this story is not one of the best fanfics I've ever read. It IS the best fanfic I've ever read! This is just absolutely amazing! Everything just draws you in even more. Amazing job!
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Reviewed By: Liorella On: December 20, 2007 02:29 PST
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Wow. Wait a minute while I get my wits back, mmkay? Absolutely amazing. I read all that you have posted so far in two nights, completely ignoring the little voice in my head telling me I should be doing something productive... like sleeping. During every chapter, I would think, 'okay, I'll stop after this chapter'. But of course not, because that would mean that I would have to stop reading, and that is a big no-no. That one chapter "Devil's Feast" has to be one of the most amazingly written chapters out there. It was dark, it was gruesome, it made me feel sick, but the story would have fallen flat on it's proverbial face without it. It was a complete necessity. The sad part is, from now on, anytime I read anything I'll be comparing it to your writing and will no doubt find that it pales in comparison. My God. Just, wow. The entire story has me hooked, beginning to finish. Darling, you are utterly amazing. Keep up the fantastic work and know with out a doubt that I will be waiting patiently for this story to continue. Hell, for a piece like this, I would keep on checking for a LONG time.
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Reviewed By: earlsblueeyedangel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 13:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I can't wait for the rest of it!!! If I could give you a higher rating than ten I would.
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Reviewed By: little Rini On: December 05, 2007 12:15 PST
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Please write soon. (>'.')> Please
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Title: OMG!!!!!
Reviewed By: thoughtless [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 04:14 PST
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i am creaming my little white panties!!!! this is sooooo good. i been waiting forever and a day for an update...so worth it. just get another chapter up before x mas and i will be have a full on climax :D xxx
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Title: Damn!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 04:35 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thats all that needs to be said
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Reviewed By: pisq On: October 31, 2007 13:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another amazing chapter I re-read the whole story and it was good that I did, otherwise my Dory-like memory wouldn't have remembered the whole military deal lol! Great continuation! Keep it up
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Reviewed By: aaralyn On: October 26, 2007 18:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The suspense is ridiculous. update soon please! Amazing chapter btw
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