| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] |
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Reviewed By: backdoor [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 19:30 PDT
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can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 10:29 PDT
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OMG! Hes ohn his way to find his Bulma! Yeah! I wonder what will happen when he sees Bulma for the first time since the've been seperated and how Bulma will react once she sees Vegeta. I cant wait for the sow down to come. Awesome chapter and cant wait for the next one to come out! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Vejitalover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 10:40 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yes! Yes! Yes! Vegeta is going to kick ass! Another great chapter, thank you!
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Reviewed By: starbrella On: October 22, 2007 17:03 PDT
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this chapter was great! i loved it! please update soon! i can't wait to see what happens next with vegeta and bulma reuniting!!!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: October 21, 2007 21:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! The queen bitch of all DBZ Fanfiction is back! Loved the update. Veggie can be very naughty can't he? I'm so glad your still writing. I can't wait to see what will happen next.
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Reviewed By: ravenreux. nli On: October 21, 2007 20:07 PDT
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Ah, I simply love every word that you write. Every chapter is positively enthralling and the exploration into each character's psyche is vividly eloquent. The flashback was a great way of contrasting the two, and the fact that Vegeta can still be darkly terrifying without the mass murder was amazing. Thanks so much for sharin'! Reux
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Reviewed By: little rini On: October 21, 2007 07:22 PDT
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I really like your stories, but your updates are so rare. :( PLEASE write more?
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 15:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the fucking greatest fanfic. love it
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Reviewed By: kinoko *not signed in* On: October 20, 2007 15:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Freakin awesome chapter!
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Title: Loved It!
Reviewed By: cera [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 14:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, a great job! Superb work with the flashback this time. This chapter reminds us how dangerous Vegeta really is. It is amazing how well Vegeta's character is captured. His emotions are more like turmoil, and they control him like a dog on a leash. Wonderful parellels between his self respect and his lose of control. I can't wait until their reunion. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Terrific
Reviewed By: kjja [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 12:12 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're very talented... one of my favorite authors. As soon as I reach the end of each chapter - I can't wait until the next. Bulma's influence is becoming more evident now since Vegeta displayed self-restraint and reasoning instead of blasting away to make his point. He's still dark, though, which is good.
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Title: Wanting more
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 08:08 PDT
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Now thats the Vegeta that I've always loved!!!!! I want more!
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Reviewed By: Arianoon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 03:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ow, I can't begin to tell you how much i love this fic. I await each new chappie with baited breath, and each time a "new chapter added" pops up in my mail box, it's like Christmas just came early. ^^ Good luck and keep it up! Arianoon
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Reviewed By: kjja [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 10:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. My curiosity is killing me! Please write another chapter soon...
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 15:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
worth the wait just stop making us wait so long
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