| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] |
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Title: UPDATE SOON ASAP!
Reviewed By: PLEASE UPDATE SOON! On: September 23, 2007 20:15 PDT
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Oh wow! I wonder who kidnappped Bulma and what do they want with her? And when Vegeta comes back will he seriously make good on his promise? What if he;s to late rescuing Bulma? Great chapter and cant wait for the next one to come out! Having said that PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Dont wait so long to update the chapter okay!?!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2007 13:59 PDT
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Very powerful read. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: September 23, 2007 11:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVED IT! I'm so glad you back to working on this fic. I was so afraid you gave up completely. Guess we can expect all hell to break loose if Geta comes back and those people still have Bulma huh? Can't wait!
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Reviewed By: backdoor [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 19:49 PDT
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yeeeaaaa for post!! can't wait for the next one!! suspenceful!!
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Title: Long Await is Fruitful
Reviewed By: cera [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 19:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though we always wait so long, this fanfic always proves to be worth the wait. Once again, you have outdone yourself. It is magnificent to incorporate only Vegeta's activities increasing the suspense felt towards Bulma's predicament. The flashbacks were great to include, although I imagine they could have been depicted more lucidly. I agree with Ravenreux in that the darker side may be your forte. I, and I am sure I am one of many, look forward to the next installment.
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Reviewed By: Pisquenta [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 15:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing!!! The emotion was so intense!
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Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 15:43 PDT
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Simply amazing. The visual descriptions and the profound introspection was superb. You may like writing warmer stuff, but I have to say you have major talent for the dark side too. Once again I loved the update and patiently await the next installment. Keep it up and thanks so much for sharin'! Reux.
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 06:54 PDT
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Wonderful! You're use of imagery was absolutely flawless in this chapter. I can't wait for more.
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Title: bluerelic
Reviewed By: bluerelic [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 23:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what an awesome story. it's no over right? vegeta still has to 'rescue' bulma! right? can't wait for the next chapter. you're an excellent author!
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Reviewed By: bluerelic [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 11:30 PDT
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awesome story.. love the (twisted) relationship between bulma and vegeta. lol
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Title: post!!!
Reviewed By: backdoor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 12:41 PDT
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i love ur story!! but pleeeeeeeeease! for heavens sake, poooost!!
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Title: Where are you?
Reviewed By: Hello? On: August 25, 2007 00:41 PDT
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Hello? Where are you? Are you still there? Please post more chapters soon! I love your story and have been waiting for more. More Please!!
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Reviewed By: poison_ivy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 16:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! very creative! i hope you update soon! kisses all the way from Portugal!
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Reviewed By: isy On: July 23, 2007 21:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update!!!!! please!!!! i'm begging you!!!!
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Title: hello
Reviewed By: isy On: July 19, 2007 21:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome story!!!! can't wait to see what happens next. update soon. please!!!!
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