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Reviewed By: isy On: July 19, 2007 21:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome story!!!! can't wait to see what happens next. update soon. please!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ebonyguitarchic [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 22:12 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excellent story. It's been a very long time since I've read a story that could make me laugh, blush, and sigh all in one sitting. Please update soon!
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Title: starbrella
Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 10:48 PDT
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yay! an update! i can't wait to see whats going to happen now. and who those men are.
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Title: chap 34 Dread
Reviewed By: Venus Legacy not logged On: June 23, 2007 10:10 PDT
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Man I didn't expect that, poor Bulma, I wonder what's in store for her, will Vegeta come to her rescue like he did in the past, or will she have to save herself this time?
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Title: Wrath chap 33
Reviewed By: venus legacy not logged On: June 23, 2007 09:54 PDT
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Wow. That was a very raw, intense and passionate chapter. I can't believe the drastic change in their relationship compared with how they were before the cold episode, when Vegeta took Bulma shopping, the pride he felt at being able to give her her hearts desire. And now it seems as if the passion between them is cruel, sinister, dark, oppressive, but then I wonder if the nature of their relationship in the beginning meant that these feelings were bound to arise in the future. Is it really hate that Vegeta feels towards Bulma, he hates with as much passion as he loves, but has that love really disappeared? Will Bulma recover the strength she had in the beginning? Perhaps absolution is the answer, and maybe it should not only come from others, from those killed on cold's ship, or Vegeta, but from within, she needs to feel absolved of the sins she believes she has committed before she can feel redeemed somehow But will she ever forgive herself? Maybe healing Vegeta's tail is the first step...
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 00:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome awesome awesome story!!! I think this story is just amazing! I cant wait till the next chapter! I hope Vegeta comes back!!!
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Reviewed By: keleosnoonna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 17:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy sh**!! what? who? why? omg, my heart is beating like crazy! you're amazing! thank you sooo much for updating!! hopefully vegeta will come rescue bulma soon!! keep it up!!!
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Title: aff
Reviewed By: pisq On: June 21, 2007 12:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AH!!!!!! What?? Is that the FBI?? MIB??? CIA? INTERFREAKINGPOL??! Come back!
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Reviewed By: aaralyn On: June 20, 2007 22:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my goodness. I need an update...He couldn't have abandoned her..not after all that they ahve ben through. and she's being arrested?! what is going on? ~Aaralyn~
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Reviewed By: PLEASE UPDATE! On: June 20, 2007 22:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh thank you for this chapter. I seriously thought that you were going to give up on it. Anyways I wonder who these two men are and what they want with Bulma? Does Vegeta have anything to do with this and if he doesnt does he know whats going on with her? Also what is she charged with? Or is Vegeta behind this whole thing? So many questions and so little answers. A short but great chapter and cant wait for the next one to come out! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! THANK YOU!
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Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 14:20 PDT
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It may have been shorter than the others, but you caught the essence of the situation perfectly. I'm betting Bulma was taken due to what happened back at the beginning of the fic...................and that Veggie isn't gone for good. Well, I can hope anyway. Great chapter, I luved it. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 14:20 PDT
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It may have been shorter than the others, but you caught the essence of the situation perfectly. I'm betting Bulma was taken due to what happened back at the beginning of the fic...................and that Veggie isn't gone for good. Well, I can hope anyway. Great chapter, I luved it. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 03:54 PDT
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looking very much forward to the next chapter....!
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Title: Glad you're back
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 03:16 PDT
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I can relate to Bulma, you try o help out the one's that you love only for them to throw it back in your face. I'm happy that you're writing this story again. I really missed it!. The last chapter with the two men in "black" i had to giggle. please don't forget this story...
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Reviewed By: kinoko *not signed in* On: June 19, 2007 23:01 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This was ridiculously short, but good none the less. I anxiously await the next chapter, keep it up, you know I'm an addict to your work. I love your updates like a fat kid loves cake! :]
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