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Title: one shots from the past
Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 22:07 EST
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I think it would be interesting to see one of Inuyasha's trysts. Lots of ways that can go (not in a pervy way)
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Title: Great Job
Reviewed By: Murasaki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 20:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying Sango so much: she was so very much a country girl in canon, and you have done a believable job of growing her into a modern mature woman. Actually, that applies to Miroku, Inu, and the rest of the Sengoku Jedai gang. It makes Kags's reactions very plausible. And yes, I'd love to see sequels.
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 15:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I know I would feel uncomfortable and out of place...Kagome probably feels that she just doesn't belong with them enymore. I don't feel that Ki is completely evil.
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 15:25 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I with Kagome was he think about her when he had his one night stands or when he ran off to Kikyo? I think she feels out of place and her only safe haven is with her family because she is just Kagome and for one moment he should let her be a teenager since they all grew up and left her behind. Anyways again great chapter and read ya next time.
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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 10:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I am hopping they will fix up there problem at lest for one night of star gazing to help move foward some. Please add more soon. As to a one shot during the 500 years one I would love to see in inu by him self eating a instant raman for the first time on since the ones she brought back to him with the emotional bagag it would give.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 07:05 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oo im kinda starting to like Ki ^_____^ and yay Souta has opened his eyes!! and yea you kinda got me thinking as to why Kagome didnt told them about Ki at her school... hmm... anyways sequels, i would love to read ^__^ and i would love to see the moment where Sesshy met his mate ^___^
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 06:36 EST
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the questioning of the maturity difference is a valid point. she is still just a 15 year old girl. while they may have been on the same level in the past, 500 years had to age you. now sango and miroku's son is the same age as kagome. it would not be natural for her not to look at them as being in the same generation as her parents. it's a mighty big obstacle that you've put in their way! i love the part you have ki playing. the wounded soul, who refuses to acknowledge it. as for the side story, back story, or whatever it will be, i would love to read about what went on. i think shippou's story alone would be enough to provide many story lines. great chapter, as usual.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 04:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maybe InuYasha should take Kagome out on a date... baka... lol
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Reviewed By: KayAkuma On: November 05, 2008 10:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Shuts eyes tight and chants* I will not harm Ki. I will not harm Ki! I'm a Kikyo hater.. Why do you bring her back? This can't be good.. I'm just gonna wait here for the next exciting chapter..
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Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 15:47 EST
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Enjoying the story - but I guess I'm confused. Since Kags is not old enough to get a talisman means she also can't be part of the pack? Are the other under-aged members only members by family connections then? Anyway, cool unique story. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 15:53 EDT
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kikyo's not alive again!! one would think since her body would had disappeared in sparkles of light and kagome's soul piece that went to where the rest of kikyo's was waiting to be reincarnated. so he just went and pooped out another incarnation and inserted kikyo's memories? man, isn't she sick of coming back and isn't naraku a sick f#@%? she should zap naraku in the @$$ for it.-- it's like a funny short i saw on cartoon network-- 'the cat came back' ~plug the following code into youtube search: WNyqXsv4Ueo ♠ she has got to see that kagome spared her when she was as good as dead, she was allowed to escape. naraku's story may explain some of her memories but yash and kagome's actions will prove inconsistent with those explanations. ♦ AHH! i just can't believe you brought her back!! *falls over*
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Title: arizonasiren
Reviewed By: arizonasiren [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 12:09 EDT
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Your story is fantastic. Inuyasha is the only anime show I like. I have read hundreds of fanfic, but I have to say, this one has got me pretty mad at old Inu. (Your writting skills are wonderful.) His automatic lack of trust in Kagome. Hating her for 500 years,for no actual reason, getting everyone elese to start doubting her as well. Treating her like dirt. Then telling her she is not a member of their pack. Only to find out he was the one who destroyed the well. OOOOH. I can see Ayame blurting out about Inuyashas prowlness in bed not knowing Kagome very well, but Sango!! I was sooo happy when Kagome finally lashed out at them. I hope she drills him a little more on just how many women. Sango made it sound like only a few, but Inuyasha implied more "all those bitches"??? I'm afraid if I was Kagome I would of told Inuyasha if you can't even tell me you love me, after everything he put her through recently, you can "Take your pack and Shove It"..... I can not wait to read more of your story. It has been awhile since I've been this excited about a fanfic. Thank you!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 13:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is Ki the reincarnation of the more Kikyou part of Kagomes soul??? Great chapter by the way...
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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 11:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great like always. This realy pickup my bad work day. I can not wait to see the next part. I like how the inu gang is considering her famliy even though the counsle is saying she can not be for years still. One thing how is her mom taking all this now that she is out of the hosipital that her baby is being keeped there and only visiting like when ehs was in the past.
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 09:45 EDT
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Wow. You updated before I could review the previous chapter! Of which, was my favorite. I can't say why, but I loved it. And I'm going to miss Dai! *sniffles* XD Interesting putting Chiaki in school with Kagome. This certainly can't end well... Although I have my suspicions... And I almost feel like Kagome is going through that stage in her life that we all go through.. "Everyone is against me! I can never do things my way!...and now I wanna cry.." Of course, her's might be slightly elevated than most. XD Anyway, Both chapters were awesome and update soon!
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