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Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2008 22:57 EDT
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Oh man!!!! I'm really slackin'. LOL! Finally getting around to reading and reviewing. Interesting chapter. Wicked new character. Can't wait to find out more about this 'sister' of Inu's. Seems like she's the type to kick some ass and get names later! With our fiesty hanyou back in the picture things are likely to heat up and get very interesting. I see there is another chapter so I am off to indulge in your wonderful fantasy some more.... Sexy dreams of youkai in wranglers and cowboy boots keep invading my dreams!
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Reviewed By: lunemoon On: October 25, 2008 15:49 EDT
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I've been reading your story for a while now, and I keep thinking to myself: Why didn't Kagome, when she first learned that she was never going to go back to the feudal era on Saturday, just go back through the well, the moment she was told (I believe this was on a Tuesday). She had 4 days to go back through the well and stay there so that Inuyasha would never think that she'd abandon him. Yet she still waited till Friday/Saturday for Inuyasha to break the damn well. GAHHH!!! She could have jumped into the well the moment she knew she couldn't go back on Saturday! AHH! Why didn't she?! It would have prevented this whole mess! Anyway, interesting story. I just finished the "Fire" Chapter, and it's getting quite complicated.
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Reviewed By: KayAkuma On: October 10, 2008 14:31 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say I LOVE this story, and have been reading nonstop for the past day.. You are a great writer! I'll be waiting on the edge of my seat until the next chapter comes out!
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Reviewed By: nsi Phalon On: October 09, 2008 18:16 EDT
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Okay love this chapter! I do feel sorry for Ki, being used by Naraku as she is and the fact that she seems to be one of those individuals that will have a sense of longing. I like how Aratakoumyou is portrayed here in the story. I also am curious to what Miroku and Sango now and if they're currently thinking about Kagome and what Inuyasha is doing now.
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 16:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was all just a matter of time....as the saying goes. INU-CHAN! I for one, believe quality work is worth the wait! Once again, I love Dai in this chapter. LOVE HIM! Probably far more than I should.....XD Anyways, wonderful chapter as always. Update when you're not too busy!
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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 11:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter like always. For the record I do not think Kagome is ooc. Normly she would have people to vent to like Sang, her mom, Kaded, her 3 friends on even inuyasha. Now her life has even more upside down and she did not have anyone for 3 weeks. While I can not wait till the next part I understand that life gets in the way of the good things. LOL
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 08:26 EDT
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i loved reading kagome unloading a little of her baggage. it's about time! the girl sometimes seems too good. even in the manga--which was more restrained than the anime--quite a few of those 'sits' were from frustration. i did like the irony of kagome talking about inuyasha never accepting responsibility for his actions, like when she broke the jewel. now i have a mental checklist of all possibilities for who ki really is, or was. i can't wait to find out.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 08:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol... that's WAY too long... and most people really cant just give up driving for that long... GREAT chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 06:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*giggles* whats wrong with The Green Mile?? it isnt that bad :P n'awww that would have been one of the cutest sights... Kagome sitting in Inuyasha lap ^___^ oooo Ki is Kikyo?? oo god help us if thats true... i can just see Shippo, a human, fat... LOL!! pieces are set?? and now the blood comes... right?? :D with much love and get well!!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 05:08 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh if I am right on who this new aide to Naraku is you are sneaky. Was she a miko at some point in her life? I am not surprised that Kagome sensed Inuyasha around before he showed up. Her getting hurt was the surest way to bring him out into the open. I wonder what he thinks of her little tirade just before he appeared though. I love the way your OCs interact so well with the canon characters in such believable ways. The kids act like you would think their kids would act. And I loved the comment about Shippou getting too many sweets as a kid. Kagome's memories of her friends should show them in a new light to their descendants. It was a touching well written scene. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 05:08 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh if I am right on who this new aide to Naraku is you are sneaky. Was she a miko at some point in her life? I am not surprised that Kagome sensed Inuyasha around before he showed up. Her getting hurt was the surest way to bring him out into the open. I wonder what he thinks of her little tirade just before he appeared though. I love the way your OCs interact so well with the canon characters in such believable ways. The kids act like you would think their kids would act. And I loved the comment about Shippou getting too many sweets as a kid. Kagome's memories of her friends should show them in a new light to their descendants. It was a touching well written scene. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 23:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think i can remember the OCs you entered in the chapter :P oo Inuyasha is trying to get of the house to Kagome *giggles* and its kinda hard to see Sesshoumaru talktive person... well demon XD i was getting all excited towards the end XD cant wait :P and what my doctor always says to me.. watch something that you will remember for a while... so watch all the comdeys you can.. laughter is the best cure :D
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 04:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
doctors are expensive... My friend just got recently diagnosed with some more allergies (other that milk, which the knew from last time, beer (which explains why she had like only half a can and threw up... ) and the medication that she has just been put on is making her nauseous... (I just spent the weekend with her...) At least with Epilepsy usually once you get the right medication going, every thing is alright (as long as you remember to take it...) are you allowed to drive? (one thing that makes it very hard, depending on how server, the limits of what (eg buses, trucks are some of the things my dad is not allowed to drive due to his epilepsy) On to other things this chapter was great... all your characters were great... Sesshoumaru's had some time to "mellow out..." which is some thin that really needed to be done to work with InuYasha and not be stressed over the hills...
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 08:11 EDT
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what i like most about this story is how you keep it packed with a full range of emotions, yet still manage to give it the edge of humor. it's not an easy thing to do. but having found that balance, you've made this one of the most pleasant and easy reads i've ever found. i love all your oc's. you've given them enough life through your words that i care every bit as much about them as i do about the previously known characters. i thought it was very cleaver to use kagome's letters in this chapter to work in little bits of knowledge. it was such a natural tool in the story setting. i'm glad that i could be a small inspiration for such a wonderful story.
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Title: something to help you feel better
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 06:00 EDT
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i9. photobucket. com/albums/a55/ginduf/chaps. jpg ♥remove the spaces after the dots! ♥ ginny
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