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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 00:08 EDT
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one wonders who all reads her correspondence to her mother, one would hope there is someone who censers the location and names of anyone she is with. espionage 101, even hints as to the location of an operative is to be kept strictly confidential. all correspondence and contact is to be rerouted just as a hacker would bounce to many different i.p.addresses all over the world to confuse trackers because even i can trace an i.p.address and get a general location (city). i'm sure someone who actually knows what they're doing can find out a whole lot more. ♠ it's good that she's learning what she's supposed to, if she could only find a way to use her obsession with golden eyes to her advantage. i'm attempting to alter a picture of a man with chaps into someone familiar for you, i do have one of yasha in motorcycle leathers in my deviantART gallery if you're interested. he looks good in leather. ♥ truly a pleasure ♥ ginny
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2008 18:18 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh the plotting and planning going on by all sides. I am surprised that Kouga and Ayami weren't told about Kagome earlier, they were her friends, sorta. I knew Inuyasha wasn't going to quietly sit by and have Kagome half a world away now that they are reunited and he has had proof that she never deserted him. I like this new inu, she sounds like she would make life interesting for Sesshomaru and Inuyasha. I hope things work out for Sarah and Dai. She sounds as if she is very smitten with him. I can't wait to see what happens next and what this new incarnation of Naraku is capable of doing. She seems to care about Naraku, as hard as that seems.
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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2008 14:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how this is going. I also like how you are hinting that Kagome's center is inuyasha even though she is not acceping it yet. It does make sense since he is the center of her world and she is his. I am looking foward to the next part.
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2008 10:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always get so excited when I see you have updated. And I can't help but read every chapter several times. I just love this story! Love it to bits! But most recently after reading this chapter I have come to love Dai..I just love his character. And boy do I ever look foward to his next appearances in the story. I LOVE HIM! Update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 17:48 EDT
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sorry you were sick, so glad things are getting better for you. happy you updated! ♣ seems like the chaos and problems are only just beginning. one can only wonder what insanity kagome's presence is going to do to her stay in america. i'm not much of an artist so i won't attempt it but i can just imagine what kouga would look like in leather chaps... always wanted to see the boys in kilts too. *opens tab to devientART to search for yash and kouga in chaps or kilt* i'll share if i find anything. ♥ a delight! &hearts ginny
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 07:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i would HATE to be on the receiving end of Kagome's anger.. *cringes* but ooo are you alright?? ive gotten out of hospital a month ago :D nearly fighting fit :D and n'awww i can sooo see Inuyasha flying to Kagome ^_______^
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 20:54 EDT
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Loved the new chapter! I really hope InuYasha finds a way to sneak over to America to get kagome back lol that would be funny :D
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 17:45 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so sorry to hear about your troubles, especially your health problems. I hope you get the right meds to lessen the seizures. Good luck with that hurricane dodging you have been doing. On to review: It was good to see Kagome in action showing her displeasure over leaving her families both human and demon. Sango has a right to be upset too since she hardly got to spend any time with Kagome before she was sent away. It might be interesting to see everyone's reaction if Kagome flirts a little with Kouga's son. But that might hurt Inuyasha too much if his mate gives an appearance of possibly preferring another. I was surprised that Kagome didn't give Sesshomaru a jolt of purification when he laid down the edict that she had to leave. I hope something can be done to make the time fly for Inuyasha and Kagome so they can be together. I look forward to see what you come up with next and what Naraku does while they wait to be together.
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Reviewed By: Im a kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 17:27 EDT
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Great chapter.Also, a seizure? Behind the wheel of your car...that must have sucked...
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 05:17 EDT
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i love dai. he seems to have all kouga's good points and a few more on top of those. it will certainly keep inuyasha's anger and jealousy levels up. i've always liked ginta and hakkaku. they never fail to make me laugh. i'm so glad that you included them. the level of testosterone in this story makes me laugh. i know it can only lead to trouble. thank you so much for taking the time to post this amidst all the real life problems.
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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 23:54 EDT
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This is still going very strong. I do wish they did not have to be seperated and I am thinking about all the loop holes that may help them get together (like she was already consided a sister to the wolfs from the past to the fact that her ring is already almost a talasman.) One thing that did botehr me was why has she not used her healing to help her famliy heal faster? I am sorry I am responding a day late after the post but I though it was best to reread the other chapeters. It is also good to know you are getting better. I can not wait to see the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 23:06 EDT
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Lovely chappy! I'm excited to see who Inuyasha's visitor is and hoping that Kagome singes Sesshoumaru's mokomoko or something. I sure as hell would have... (But then again I'm just plain mean!) Love the building of tension between the characters and very interested to see how this comes out. Great work and glad that you've made it through the past few weeks. Toodles for now!
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Reviewed By: not logged in currently On: September 16, 2008 17:24 EDT
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Another great chapter. I was so glad to see that you had updated. Yay! I look forword to updates in the future. Great job!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 11:15 EDT
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If I were Kagome, I'd tell them all to shove it up their ass. Maybe when she's alpha female, she can punish them all, or at least inflict some pain. Inuyasha's rejection of her made me want to drop him in the pits of hell. Bastard. I'd dump them all....I'm sorry to hear about your illness and seizure. I've found that getting sick always sets off my seizures. Sucks. Hope you are over it now. Great chapter. Can't wait to see Kouga! I wonder if he can have more than two mates? Heheh. I'm evil. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 03:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter! Before my dad first when in to find out if he had epilepsy, he went threw a normal busy intersection and landed on the paddock next to it.. Dai sound Kool!
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