| "Pack Law" Reviews/Comments [ 323 ] |
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Reviewed By: phalon23 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 00:45 EDT
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^___^ I love the chapter and I can't wait to see who made Yasha smile... Is this an acquaintance pray tell? Keep up the good work, the story is wonderful!
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Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2008 03:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this story!! I love the plot its so different then other stories I have read!!! keep up the great work..and update soon!!!:D:D
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2008 23:41 EDT
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♥ hope you're better and everything else is all settled for you and i'm glad you're back! ♥ sincerely, ginny
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Reviewed By: Im a kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 17:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a very good Fanfic! One of the best i've ever read on here actually. Great job and please update.
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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 16:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am loving the story. I like how they have changed with time but at the same time are still the same. I also like how you have made Kagome more powerfull but at the same time have not made her into god mode. Also how the pack as leared and decibes how difrent way of talking to Inu means so much in the pack law. My only problem so far is you are putting so many road blocks between inu and Kagome. Please so not make her wait so long to be with him. Let them get by with a loop whole like saying the ring means she was part of the pack from the past when the age was much lower or something. Please keep adding more.
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Reviewed By: not logged in currently On: August 14, 2008 18:26 EDT
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Hey GREAT story I can't wait for an update... SOON hopefuly,... Please... Pretty please???
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: July 25, 2008 12:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story has everything a good story should. The characters are right, the plots well thought out and totally hooking. Please update as soon as the plot bunnies come back. Please!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 23:00 EDT
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i'm not into the whole 'dominant male'/'submissive female' thing but if you put it that way...
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 20:07 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel so sorry for Inuyasha having to wait for Kagome some more. They deserve to be together. I do have to say that Kouga is a good choice of substitute protector for Kagome. I just hope Hitomu doesn't end up dead, he is becoming a favorite character. If he has to interfere with Inuyasha getting close to Kagome one more time I fear he won't survive the encounter. Congrats on the win, you deserve it.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 09:14 EDT
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another bump in the road for our favorite pair? how long will the separation last? i loved your steamy scene. the emotional power you gave to a more mature inuyasha came through so well. it would be fun to read kagome's thoughts of the incident in more depth. it would be daunting for a 16 year old girl to come up against something like that. i can't wait to read the interaction between kagome and kouga. and inuyasha and kouga. the opportunities for dramatics and comedy between the two males are always fun to read. i'm glad you're bringing him into the story. your story deserves all the recognition it gets. thank you for this source of enjoyment.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 05:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whine of disappointment, this was SUCH a great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 03:15 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Always good. Lime content was supurb. I'm sorry but even if Kouga is mated there's gonna be problems-a-brew'n. With Kags being near Kouga and Hito, Inu going to go balistic (not in a good way). Inu's youkai is very aggressive. I likey ALOT. I guess that's what happens after taking cold showers for 500 years. LOL
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 01:41 EDT
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Congrats on your wins!! I know the IYfanguild noms are underway, and your fic has been nom'd in a few catagories!! so good luck! Now on to the review! I do a little happy dance when i get the new chap alert in my inbox!!! this chapter was amazing!!! Poor Inu....so close.....Kagome's gotta be gnashing a few teeth in frustration as well. The citrusy section was great...and to have Hito be the one to interupt them (i'm truly amazed the boy is still concious!) was brilliant.....EVIL but brilliant! And now Inuyasha must be seperated from her again, while she runs about the countryside with both Hito and Koga??? you truly love to torture these two! I can't wait to see how this plays out....I have a sneaking suspicion our hanyou is going to go AWOL shortly after she leaves so he can "protect" Kagome from the ones he views as rivals!!! This ought to be interesting!!!!! I would really like to see more of Sango in this fic tho....you don't give her much attention for being a high ranking member of the pack......
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 00:29 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
even if Koga is mated, i still think theres going to be trouble :P and we were sooo close with Inuyasha and Kagome :P and im surprised that Hitomu didnt died XD and congraz on your winnings :D
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 21:14 EDT
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excellent plot twist! I wasn't expecting that. Kagome submitting to koga is going to be...interesting.
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