| "Pack Law" Reviews/Comments [ 323 ] |
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 21:37 EDT
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Great new chapter. Inu really needs to kiss but now!!! I hope that sota recovers well. Keg needs to give him more than a piece of her mind now!!!!
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Reviewed By: (nsi) phalon On: June 22, 2008 17:23 EDT
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Another great chapter! Poor Yasha, he's going to emo mode. I can't wait to read more, especially with the whole impending plot line you have planned. Good luck and nice job!
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 14:16 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The 'fuck up Olympics'.......yep, he'd definately win all three places in that! *wickedly smirking* The head-banging-on-desk scene was great and just what the doctor ordered. I find Inu punishes himself mentally more severly than 100 face-planting 'sits' Kagome could dish out at him. Guilt is very prevolent in Inu's character and it's coming across extremely well. *giggling* Now, whether or not Kagome forgives him right away is another story. She needs to leave him dangling by a thread for at least another chapter, ne??? Congrats on the noms on FA.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 13:17 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well at least Inuyasha realizes how badly he messed up. Inuyasha is going to have to work hard to convince Kagome that he does love her and want her for a mate after what he did. Kagome will eventually forgive him though, she always does. They were right in saying that she won't want to stay in the den but she will to protect her family. As long as she doesn't decide to "protect" the pack by leaving the den she should be safe for a while. I think if they can keep her occupied with something she can see as helpful, like training her powers, she won't notice the protection but when she realizes that they are doing it more to protect her then helping her get stronger she will be livid. I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter to see where you go next.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 07:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what? the chapters ended already NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! InuYasha took THAT long to realise that Kagome was pack all the way from the beginning.. (hell if she wasn't there, there wouldn't be a pack..)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 06:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what? the chapters ended already NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! InuYasha took THAT long to realise that Kagome was pack all the way from the beginning.. (hell if she wasn't there, there wouldn't be a pack..)
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 06:51 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww Sesshy is back ^^ and ooo me love his mate :P but i havent figured it out what Kagome was going to ask >.> and i wonder if Kagome is going to slap Inuyasha couple of times, when he gets to her :P
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 06:40 EDT
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it would be a beautiful paradox to have them rebuild/re-dig the well so she could go back just to smack him upside the head and scream "you kaze no kizu'd the well in the future, you jerk!!" at least make the attempt. . . someone could remind her that sesshoumaru has tensaiga so if mama or souta don't make it he could easily revive them. . . emotional chapter and i'm glad she's not depressing anymore, she may be better off angry, certainly funnier. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 05:08 EDT
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a hotel? i think kagome's family should stay with the rest of the gang
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 05:11 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well at least now Inuyasha won't be so angry with Kagome and their relationship can heal and develop if Kagome will forgive him for blaming her for the closing of the well. I really hope that Kagome's family pulls through this ok. The pack needs her family to show them that there are people out there that can accept them as they are. Besides Kagome and Inuyasha will never forgive themselves if they don't make it. It was interesting to see Naraku again, will we finally hear what happened after the well closed? Poor Miroku now has the hole in his hand again I assume from the past discussion between Miroku and Sango. I am greatly looking forward to see where you take everyone from here.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 14:26 EDT
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very good story. i love it.
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Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 06:19 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open from June 18th 2008 through July 1st 2008 (12 am). Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 05:52 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open from June 18th 2008 through July 1st 2008 (12 am). Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 04:48 EDT
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i just love your twists. i thought it would have been those who were after the jewel who had sealed the well. i never would have guessed that it was inuyasha, himself. i don't imagine it would be too in-character for him to grovel over his mistake, but it would be nice. now, they can get back to being a couple. in love. and all that fluffy stuff. i do like your characterization of a mad inuyasha, though. i hope you don't loose that edge now. i had the impression that naraku was a projection. i can't wait to see if he's really back, or if someone is using his likeness. i loved shippou's line at the end. he always has to find a way to get the last word in. it was the perfect way to end the chapter. i will eagerly await you next posting, and i thank you for a chapter full of action, and a little laugh at the end.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 03:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats gotta be a big slap in the face for Inuyasha... but he needed it :P Naraku!?! *starts to panick* THAT BASTARD WONT DIE!! well maybe in the manga XD
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