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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 01:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
500 year to say "I told you so..."
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 22:38 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
III like it! And who'd a thunk it - Dog Boy did it himself, the baka! Lol. And awesome battle there too, BTW. Lottsa action, I must say. And ifin ya wanna do a LJ thing, am kewl. Til next install, update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 21:14 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*wickedly chortling* Ha, ha....HE caused the well to close!!!! Great twist!!!! Never saw that one coming!!!!! Grovel dog-boy....beg for forgiveness you baka!!!! *feindishly smirking* Boy, there's going to be enough crow-youkai to feed him for the next 500 years. *grinning ear to ear* You've made me one happy lady (if you couldn't tell). The battle scene was awesome! You did a spectacular job! Nuraku??? You threw me another curve ball there. Is it truely Nuraku.....or another pesky off shoot that refused to die????? Hmmmmm.....I wonder....
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 18:21 EDT
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The "I told you so" at the end of this chapter was classic inu/ship!!! I loved it!!! as for battle scenes, this one was great! I must confess, those are my weakness, I love to read them, but I'm horrible at writing them! I rely heavily on my "creative" beta for help with those! She's simply wonderful at them! Anyway, another wonderful chapter! I can't wait to see how inuyasha grovels after this little fiasco...five hundred years of anger for something that was his fault!!! that's priceless!!! I hope Kagome does something really evil to make him suffer the way he's made her suffer all week!! Maybe she'll kiss Hitomu??? lol...
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 15:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The battle was quite well written. I guess a windscar could destroy the well. I think it might be one of the only ways it could be ruined. I don't think that just smashing the top would do it because the magic seems to be inside the shaft of the well not the rim around it. A windscar could dig into the earth and destroy the magic in the well. I don't blame Shippo for saying "I told you so." I be he would later wish he had danced around InuYasha in circles flailing ribbons and tossing confetti to really drive the point home. hehe well, the image is entertaining to be anyway.I hope you get the next chapter out soon! I'll do a happy dance when I see the notification in my in-box!
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 10:23 EDT
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Thank you for the new chapter. the puppy is progrssing great! I loved the new chapter. thanx again
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Reviewed By: LiL Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 09:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was pretty cool to wake up this morning and get a new chapter already haha. THANK YOU! Great chapter too by the way. You always leave me wanting to read more. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 08:45 EDT
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i usually skim over the battle/fight scenes unless i'm editing so i thought your skirmish was just fine. . . that was pure irony, he was so pissed that she didn't show up and it's his won damn fault. lol. he should be on his knees kissing her feet about now. a$$. . . one hopes the family's okay... maybe she should be purifying her brother and mum, i think her reiki purifies naraku's miasma. then again this is your wonderful story and i will shut my big mouth now (well you know what i mean). ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: LiL Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 23:11 EDT
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ok seriously, u need to write more nowwwwww. otherwise i might just die, and that's sad
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 17:56 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. We now know/suspect that the well is somehow damaged in the upcoming fight. Part of me thinks that Inuyasha is the one who destroys/damages the well. If he is, Kagome, Miroku, Sango, Shippo and Hitomaru are all going to jump all over him for thinking Kagome sealed the well after deciding not to return to him. I am laughing at Hitomaru's hitting on Kagome even though she and Inuyasha are fated to be together. Hitomaru is acting so much like his father. I am still awaiting the appearance of Sesshomaru and his mate, if it isn't Misery. The next chapter should be very good since we finally see what happens with the well.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 13:10 EDT
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hito's mannerisms are somehow reminiscent of a certain monk's... i don't know about kagome but that's sango's and miroku's son... if it were me the scene in 'back to the future' comes to mind when teen aged lorraine kissed marty *shivers (not in a good way)* eww! i just got kissed by my best friend's son
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Reviewed By: Kittty On: June 15, 2008 03:23 EDT
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So far I LOVE it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 14:54 EDT
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another fabulous chapter deary!! I am really beginning to love the new generation of characters in this story, they have inherited some of the best qualities of the original cast!!! You have me hanging on the edge to see just what happens to the well, and if Kagome's family is in serious trouble now that the enemy knows who they are and what the shrine signifies to the group! I can't help but wonder what will be Hitomu's fate when Inuyasha finds out exactly what happened to the well and that Kagome didn't really abandon him....will the pair kiss and make up, or will Hito actually make a play for Kagome? Poor Kagome, forever entangled in these pesky little "love triangles"! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 10:23 EDT
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now that i'm all caught up, i just wanted to tell you that i love your story. it was recommended by catbaker, and i thank her for helping me find such entertaining reading! i love the twists that you have incorporated in this story. you really have me guessing. i love the tempo and flow of your writing. the chapter length is perfect for the speed of the story. i love your characterizations. i wish there was more of the history the original characters went through, but i will wait to see if it comes out in future chapters. i do love the new generation, but i'm rather attached to the originals. thank you for such an entertaining story. i look forward to future chapters.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 01:10 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahaha Hitomu is surely going to get his ass kick very soon XD and cliffy.... *falls of chair* it was getting soooo GOOD!!! and why do i get the feeling that Kagome never made it alive the first time she tried to went to the well (Inuyasha's time)
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