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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 22:18 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plot bunnies be damned to the fifth hell, don't do that! I think you're getting your jollies leaving us hanging. *snort* Build up to a kick ass battle......then it's tune in next time...ARGGGG!!! *giggling* Hito is really playing with fire if he thinks he can get one up on his 'uncle'. Inu better hope that Kagome will even accept him as his 'Mate' after the way he's been treating her. I know I'd probably have trottled him by know. Wonder how much crow-youkai Inu's going to eat when the real reason the well closed comes out. I know it wasn't done by Kagome to piss him off (at least I don't think deliberately or at all). You better show him doing some major ass kissing. Something I'm sure we would all love to see. *wickedly smirking*
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 22:03 EDT
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so if inuyasha is sesshomaru's beta when do we get to see sess?
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Reviewed By: Kurinju-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 22:02 EDT
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NO! I hate cliff hangers like that! Sure they can be fun in a serious moment or a moment of surprise, but not when the action is just about to start! I wanna know what happens! Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 20:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another good chapter...
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 20:01 EDT
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I loved the update. It was a great way to end a VERY stressful week as my baby dog almost died! Thank you for giving me something to look forward to. Please update soon! I do so hate cliff hangers that hang on to long!!!
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Reviewed By: phalon23 (nsi) On: June 13, 2008 19:24 EDT
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Oh awesome chapter! I really like the dialogue that's going on and have a feeling the well is about to be destroyed. Because then it would no longer work I believe. You have totally got me excited about future chapters.
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Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 16:35 EDT
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Wow, I return to find 2 updates!!!! Loved the last chapter. Unfortunate that some of Miroku's lechorous traits have been passed on but I'm sure it will provide much entertainment for your readers! Poor Kagome, I'm sure I would have blown a gasket at Inuyasha by now. He can sure be a growly guy!!!! I wouldn't doubt she stays in modern Japan just because of the ass he is being! Loved the 'witnessed' kiss! Should bring about even more tension. Misery could use to kick some ass! Take the inu down a notch! Loved your take on her! So strange seeing a character of your own in someone elses work! Stange but exciting. Waiting to see what a certain teenage boy has in store for Kagome. Poor boy doesn't understand the mess he is getting himself into. Still curious about your mistery 'evil'. Great expansion on the story and I will be waiting for more!!!!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 18:49 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I am falling behind on my reviews. I loved the last three chapters. I like how Hitomu seems to be falling for Kagome. This will add confusion between Kagome and Inuyasha for a bit, and Inuyasha will get a taste of how Kagome felt when he went after Kikyou. I like Misery's appearance, I too am a fan of kodiaqkitten's piece. I can't wait to see Sesshomaru and who you have as his mate here. And I am getting curious as to the identity of the mysterious stranger that Sango heard and recognized but didn't inform the readers on. I can't wait to see what happens next, and I promise to try to do better with the reviews.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 01:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
InuYasha gets really snappy... I think someone needs to get laid! lol.
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Reviewed By: DragonKitsune-not logged in On: June 08, 2008 04:39 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww crap, Hitomu's trying to get to Kagome now? bad puppy!*smacks with rolled up news paper* do you WANT to be what they serve to Inuyasha tomorrow or his new pelted rug? not a smart move with Inu's unstable Youkai when it comes to Kags, you know what i mean. (did i guess right then? or close? lol) Update when u can! -dessy
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Reviewed By: Kurinju-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 22:27 EDT
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Wow! This is really good. I love your writing style, it's really easy to get in to. You have a really well developed story going here. Though InuYasha does remind me slightly of one of those raving, psyco, burned-by-love lunatics(I'm fucking pissed as shit that she betrayed me and I'm going to make her life a living hell, but in the end I know we're meant to be together). Kind of odd, but I think I can get over it. Usually I don't like a lot of OCs, but so far your pulling it off really well. I can't wait to read more. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 21:50 EDT
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Another wonderful chapter! Just what did Hito mean when he said he would win the war through Kagome? Surely he doesn't think he can challenge Inuyasha and win??!! I guess I'll just have to wait until the next chapter...sigh!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 06:48 EDT
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one can never underestimate the stupidity of the male of the species... nor can they be properly portrayed in their true glory but you have come close. ~ salutations, ginny
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 22:33 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i would be shitting myself being in Inuyasha's rage!! O.o im just scared thinking of it T_T awww im soo interested what ya going to do with the well lol :P and yea i think Sango and Miroku mihgt have to work on their third to make up for the second :D if Hitomu is going to fight for Kagome... HOLY CRAP!!
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 20:29 EDT
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Thank you for bringing all your intresting characters out to play! I thought that Misery was a character that I'd read about recently. Every day I look forward to seeing a new chapter notice in my inbox. Thank you for all of the intresting chapters so far~keep up the good work!
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