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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 19:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please hurry with another chapter!!! i cant wait to find out what happened to kagome and the well...
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Title: Wait...
Reviewed By: Pinkit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 18:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Inuyasha finally accepted that he and Kags are meant to be together. That´s good. All in all a very explanative chapter. Now about the well, you mentioned green eyes staring at Kagome as she came thru the well. Does it have to do with Shippou?
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Reviewed By: phalon23 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 15:40 EDT
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Oh dear oh dear. XD Hitomu-no-baka is just like his father! I don't so much thinks he loves Kagome as he's trying to make Inuyasha come to a realization. I don't think he did any sealing. I have to wonder if the well gets destroyed in some way, that'd seal it right? Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2008 18:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i love your fanfic!!!! i cant wait for another review=D so looking forward to the reason why kagome couldnt go hrough the well...and inuyasha!! omg i want inuXKag to resolve it allXD i hope kagome changes history or something so taht he wouldnt have had to be alone for all those years...eeekXP i cant wait...upload soon=D
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Title: I just keeps getting worse...
Reviewed By: Pinkit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 23:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You had me on the edge of my seat for this last part of the chapter, really Hitomu couldn´t have though of something other than that... I would have love to have seen Inuyasha´s face, oh the agony...i guess i will have to wait for the next chapter, maybe before my birthday? (june 6th) What happened when Kagome came through the well, did she unadvertedly seal the well thinking that Inuyasha would distract her coming for her before the time agreed? I am going to love seeing things work out between them, since I like the way you have developed the characters. It´s not the "everyday mushymush Inuyasha-mates-kagome-and-wow-they-had-twins" fic. AND I LIKE IT! Love your writing style, I wish the chapters would be a little longer. Maybe give us a flashback of what happened the day she came through the well, explaining what happened to the time-space quantum-thingy? Yes I know, im ranting...GOod fic, I hope to see more of it soon. :)
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Reviewed By: anonymous... On: June 04, 2008 18:02 EDT
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NICE!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!! InuYash is so going to to EXPLODE!! And Hitomu is so dead, or maybe InuYash will blame it all on Kagome... Oh the suspence is killing me! I can't wait for your next Update!!!
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Reviewed By: Jinn Ryu On: June 04, 2008 11:12 EDT
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The email's koyoukai@hotmail.com Another fantastic chappie!(And updated so quickly, too!) I'm really excited for the next one. InuYasha's going to have a fit, and I wouldn't miss it for the world! Plus maybe they'll get some interaction
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Reviewed By: phalon23 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 14:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best futuristic stories, EVER! Oh dear, Hitomu is so dead! I really just love the story and how it's going, there's just so much you can do with this story and I can't wait for what happens next in the tale. Everything is coming together really well.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 03:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHA i couldnt stop laughing!! to think the last people you want to see that is them... i think Hitomu is in hell of trouble, Kagome yelling, and Inuyasha getiin sat... its going to be great to see the next chapter :P
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 23:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Better grab the shovel and start digging, poor Hitomu is not long for the world! Inu could bring WacDonalds down on their heads if he uses the Kaze No Kizu on Hitomu. *snickering* But in Hitomu's defence, look who his father is. The boy doesn't stand a ghost of chance of not turning out a letcherous as his daddy. *giggling* Hmmmm....wonder who Ken's mysterious benefactor is? Are you going to give us a hint or are you going to leave us in the dark a bit longer? *wink*
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 19:18 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*whistles low* Oh, this is not gonna settle well with Inu. Hehe... *rubs hand together* Wonder who's gonna catch hell first? Lol. Great chap. Update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 19:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god.. why do you hate Hitomu????? InuYasha is going to kill him...
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 18:11 EDT
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So the plot thickens!! Poor Kagome, she just can't seem to catch a break. Inuyasha will probably be even more self righteous in his anger now. Please tell me that it all works out in the end. All this angst is getting to me. I guess I will just have to wait and see how it works out...sigh!
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Reviewed By: DragonKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 17:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Iyaaaaaaaaa! what the hell! did he have to kiss her? lol, i gues it was the best he could come up with at the moment, ne? man! I'm curious about this whole "Kag's not returning" -Is it that Kag's gets kidnapped when she was suposed to go back and she never went back because the pack of her time period saved her and she ends up just staying with them anyways? is that why she doesnt go back? or is the well sealed buy the bad guys as well?? EEEEEEEEEEkkk! I'm too damned curious about all this! Update plz when you can! -Dessy
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Reviewed By: DragonKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 16:54 EDT
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I Just read CHapter 10 and OMG! THAT WAS GOOD! I'm going to go read CHapter 11 now- Tootles!
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