| "Pack Law" Reviews/Comments [ 323 ] |
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 15:43 EDT
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OOOHHH OOOHHH OOOHHH juicy!!! I know that life has a way of pushing it's way in but don't leave us hungry viewers hanging for toooo long!!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 15:31 EDT
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i actually had to hide my face when i read that. and in walks yasha... i waited to compose myself to write this and i'm still flabbergasted. i can't help but wonder what in the world!? and from the manga/anime canon (not counting the movie), that was her first kiss. she should compose herself and then slug him! AHH! . . . seems like sango and the rest of them need kagome around. they don't seem as grounded without her. judging from my reactions to this story i have become emotionally invested. ~ truly a delight, ginny
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 12:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Miroku's son kissing Kagome...priceless!!! and right in front of Inuyasha no less....how funny is that!!! how is poor Kags gonna talk her way outta that one? And Miroku must be gushing with fatherly pride!!! This was yet another great chappie dear. I felt every ounce of tension in the beginning, and laughed my a** off throughout the end....keep em comin hun!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty at hell (school) On: June 01, 2008 20:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Chapter is great. I think that Kagome is going to try and go down the well but end up being in her own time and then cryig.... and porbaly geting hurt... (at least scraped knees or some thing with that skirt)
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Reviewed By: Jinn Ryu On: June 01, 2008 18:32 EDT
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You're so good to us! Thank you for updating your wonderful story! I love the instinctive references in the plot; they're my favorite part, and I'm always on the lookout for stories that include them. Do you know of any others? Again, thank you so much!
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 18:27 EDT
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Loved this chapter...I'm a sucker for internal struggles with these characters!!! and back story is totally nessecary for a good fic....so don't stress about it!! I really love the references to the whole time paradox...it makes my brain hurt too!! I eagerly await the next installment! (btw...It's great that Misery will be popping in on this fic! I love kodaqkitten's fic, and she's one of my fave OC's!)
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 12:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Background is always good!!! Inu's sides better help him get his head out of his a**! And quick! Kags will end up 'sit'ing him till doomsday if he doesn't wise up! Oh....Sango's using weapons from a friend of Ship-dips....Missy!!!! *SQUUUEEEEEE* I'm doing my best inspire kodiaqkitten's plot bunnies ('cause she does the same for my art bunnies!). *wink*
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Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 11:10 EDT
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LOL! I feel so loved! Great chapter, always good to have a chapter that builds the story! Really wondering who the bad guy is.... I have a few thoughts, but am waiting to find out! Can't wait for Shippo and Sesshy to make an appearance... and of course Missy! As for my updates, you'll have to wait. I fly to Hawaii for a week tomorrow. *Hides as objects are thrown* Will get back at it when I get home!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 06:07 EDT
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phuk the paradox... if using quantum geometry and loop quantum gravity theory in time travel her memory of meeting the 'pack' will be retained even if she goes back and changes history (red dwarf/dr. who/star trek/sci-fi geek) so i don't think it would matter if she were to go back... she's already changed a whole bunch of history since she first fell down the well, what's wrong with changing it a bit more? . . . one hopes that the shrine and grounds are under 'pack' surveillance since the bad guys know of kagome and it would probably be best if she were tailed on her way to and from school for her protection. . . i am enjoying this story and please excuse my insane rambling. i don't really care how long your chapters are as long as you update and i think that you update pretty consistently and frequently enough that i don't have to read the previous chapter to reacquaint myself with the story. i think you are doing an excellent job and it is a wonderful story. ~ salutations, ginny
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Title: longer hapters
Reviewed By: xochitl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 19:47 EDT
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please write longer chapters ...and just toknow...how often will you update_
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 21:47 EDT
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i would be like, "if the well's going to close then i want to go back now, take me back home so i can get my pack..." and if they didn't i would start walking. . . very emotional there, roller coaster of emotions. ~ thank you, ginny
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Title: I LOVE IT
Reviewed By: Inu_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 21:19 EDT
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PLEASE don't stop writing this is one of the best stories i have ever gotten a chance to read. I am drawn in and cant get out :)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 19:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Someone has some pent up anger... (or not so pent up...) Another wonderful chapter...
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 17:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I am enjoying this fic tremendously!! I'm wondering why the well closed...surely there is a logical explanation. I love the interaction between all the characters. Your story is very good...it leaves the reader with so many options as to what may or may not happen. I'm hooked!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 14:21 EDT
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hmm why would they tell kagome that she's not going back before she even tries? now they're going to stop her from going back and inuyasha will have blamed kagome for what they did or will something else happen?
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