| "Pack Law" Reviews/Comments [ 323 ] |
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 14:05 EDT
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Maybe it is just that I can relate more to Inuyasha than to Kagome but I really don't understand everybody jumping on the "oh poor Kagome, they doubted her loyalty" bandwagon. Like she is the one who was seriously injured by knowing for all of five minutes that things got screwed up. They had 500 YEARS to dwell on why she would betray them, which is how it was viewed. And Inuyasha saw the woman he loved once again turn on him just when he was about to get closer to her. Can you say repeating history? So OF COURSE he thought it was because she didn't want to be with him! His childhood was filled with neglect and abuse, the fact that he even opened his heart to her in the first place is a miracle, so his reaction is completely understandable, while she is acting like the spoiled teenager that she is. Sorry, didn't mean to rant. Ummm... I really like your story please keep writing so I don't feel guilty for ranting.
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Reviewed By: Mela9898 On: May 30, 2008 11:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I am one those people who have been reading and not review which I know is bad but I really do like you story, and I cant wait to see where you take it has so much potential!
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 11:47 EDT
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AH! I just want to know what happened SO BAD! But at the same time I don't want to know too soon... UGH! I'm so conflicted! Update soon!
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: cubangreekchik [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 11:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit, I check to see if you update constantly! I am dying to know what's going to happen! Gah!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 08:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oki first of all... the grammar isnt that bad, but i do love this ^^ i really wanted.. more like needed to give Inuyasha a slap!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 08:14 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So something/someone else sealed the well and Inuyasha gets proven wrong by Shippo. Now I am wondering if it was Miroku to prevent Kagome coming back and changing the past. I am sorry to hear about Kohaku, Rin and their family, though it was a nice way to tie into the young Kagome. I hope Inuyasha gets over his fury at Kagome quickly and they get back together soon. Another thing I am curious about is the identity of Sesshomaru's mate. I am looking forward to seeing what happens next.
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Reviewed By: DragonKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 00:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh, poor Kags! Ack, poor all of them for having to go through such a confusion like that! I really feel for them. Surprised Kags made it that far with out breaking down sooner and just kicking Inu in the balls in frustration. lol, I dont think that would go over too well, but it is amusing none the less to think about, to me at least, but i do feel sorry for Inu as well as the rest of the pack. Keep at it, there's no way this story's boring, most of us are just lazy reviews. lol I'll start reviewing every chap i read from now on (is pledging) -Dessy
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 23:24 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Am I bored? HELL, NO!!! This is way cool!! I've read alot of 'pack law' type stories and this is new spin on it. I'm really interested which path your going to take the Inu Crew on. Oh.....Inu so deserved that sit! I'm surprised she stopped at one. *grinning*
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 22:27 EDT
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keep up the good work. Just to let you know the last line has a mess up you might want to fix it really quick. but other then that there is no confusion, it reads smoothly. just like if you were saying it as you were writing it. Good job!
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 21:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok...I'm curious to see how you twist this plot and make it so that Kags can't go through...there could be a bit more description to the characters and the surroundings, but overall I'm enjoying this fic! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 19:41 EDT
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I'm glad I added this to my favorites yesterday, major payoff today. Everyone seems in character and interesting plot, can't wait for more :)
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Title: Pack Law
Reviewed By: HayleyM425 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 19:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Umm...ABSOLUTELY LOVING IT! Keep it coming!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 19:10 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nope, not bore or confused, actually damned excited! :D Was wondering how that particular meeting was going to go and Id say it went swimmingly, lol. Liked that flashback on the airport scene, with Inu and Miroku awaiting the plane for the others but seeing a very small Kagome instead. Still brings to mind what had happened and/or what will happen when she goes back, or tries to. Most excellent chap! Update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 17:51 EDT
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Damn! You really like leaving us on the edge of our seats! I love how Inuyasha hasn't even considered that perhaps he's the reason she never returned! Kagome might need to sit him into next year to vent the rage she'll be feeling! Loved it! Looking forward to the next installment!
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Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2008 23:47 EDT
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Ohhh, you're evil!!! leaving it on a cliff like that! Can't wait to see the next chapter!
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