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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2008 15:17 EDT
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great last few chapters. Keep up the good work I can't wait to see what happened to seal up the well!! I want to see just what happens when inu sees kegs for the first time in years!!! WOW!! I wonder how many kids Sango and Mir have now!!! Update again soon please!
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Title: waiting
Reviewed By: xochitl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2008 14:32 EDT
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um i know ypujust updated ..but how soon will you be updating?
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 17:30 EDT
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the question is... are they going to attempt to prevent the well from closing thus changing history or are they going to go on from the present? . . . one wants to see a happy yasha *hugs the puppy* . . . in eager anticipation...
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 11:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This just keeps getting better and better. A lot of conjectures on what couldve happened. Most excellent! Update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 06:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No the real problem is... I can picture it... SUV.... you are fantastic...
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 16:47 EDT
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well, Okay, I think this Hitamoto guy *did I spell his name right?* is like Miroku's son or something, and Sarah is Shippo's like . . .granddaughter maybe, Or maybe Hitamoto is like Miroku's grandson, damn I'm confused! Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 22:26 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did Kagome seal the well to prevent Inuyasha from coming early or did something else happen that caused the well to seal? Or did someone else seal the well? If it was Kagome she is going to get yelled at by Inuyasha when he sees her next and if not hse is still going to get yelled at by Inuyasha for not noticing the well was sealed. I can't wait to see how this all turns out.
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Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 15:16 EDT
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Ohhh! You're evil leaving it on that note. Will our hanyou be all angst in the future? Will be waiting to find out!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 20:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when that well get back in order... Kagome is going to be in the "doghouse..."
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 19:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no! I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see what caused Kagome to decide to seal the well or even if it was her doing. Perhaps it is permanent seeing how Hitomi didn't almost call Kagome "Aunt" like he almost called InuYasha "Uncle". That would be not so fun for InuYasha to have to wait for her like that. Maybe it's a good thing that he didn't talk to her about the mating thing before the well sealed because he would be more likely to take it as a rejection of that... it would sting worse... Not that he wouldn't feel somewhat rejected at some point int time, but hopefully he can see that there could be many reasons that the well is sealed. Also, there is no such thing as a autumn solstice. I believe you are going for the Autumnal Equinox. There are Winter and Summer solstices and Vernal(spring) and Autumnal(fall) equinoxes. Each of these events occur around the 19th-23rd of March(vernal equinox: equal day and night), June(summer solstice: longest day), September(autumnal equinox: equal day and night), and December(winter solstice: longest night). Just a little more info that you really needed... I also know a lot about moon cycles, so if you happen to want help with that just ask me and I'll be happy to. I'll never point out any moon cycle mistakes people make because just about everyone makes them in fan fiction. I have really enjoyed reading your story so far. I hope you continue to update frequently and I thank you for doing so so far and sharing your work in the first place :)
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 17:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah man... dun, dun.. duuuun! Bam, cliffee! Got to admit, I did not see that one comin. Excellent chap, and love the humor as well, hehe. Update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 14:27 EDT
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i wouldn't have seen a problem with him coming to visit her in the evenings for a few hours every couple days, they are doing the sengoku jidai equivalent of dating after all. . . one hopes she doesn't stay gone and the well doesn't stay sealed as it will be a heck of a long 500 year wait. . . one feels yasha's frustration, anger and despair and hopes this new development is only temporary. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 14:25 EDT
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my god, she sealed him off! Oh my god! NOOOOOO! *cries* update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 17:20 EDT
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Aww, another fluff filled lovely chapter! I loved how he distracted her. Plot is coming together very nicely! Can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 17:10 EDT
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Wow! This is getting intense. Bumping into 'pack family'... Inuyasha best ask the question fast or Kagome is going to find out from someone else... We don't want an angry miko!
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